My Response to Ling's Paper.

In the essay that Ling wrote he pulled out pieces of what the author said in the article. There were the first four lines of the second paragraph where I did not understand a thing, but I tried really hard to. Throughout the entire article he switched some words around and the Grammar was not the best, however the Punctuation was alright in some cahpters. In other chapters I thought he used too many commas e.g Chapter1, Line 4. I don't believe he summarized all of it, I don't believe he talked much about what the author stated when he talked about people's obsession in a way to on Avatar sites even when they're tired from a long day's work. In terms of his Rhetorical Context I got that he was talking to his friends e.g Chapter 2, Line 6.
I knew his point of view because it was in Chapter 3 and 4. I saw his objections to the article clearly, he also convinced me of his point mainly because of his evidence in Chapter 3, Lines 11 and 12. He definitely provided enough evidence to support his point and it was greatly informative and enough.

Ling: My Editorial Classmate

Ling is originally from China and he's a freshman like me. He likes the 'Lord of the Rings' and listening to Pop music which we also have in common, however he likes listening to country music which is a total shock because he looks like he enjoys listening to Rock n' Roll. From his profile I can also see that he likes soft music, but soft music puts me to sleep and so I try not to listen to it much.