Monday, April 23, 2007

In Class Writing No. 9(My Response to Elaina's Paper).

What is her argument? and how did she set it up?
The essay was FANTASTIC!!!!, I was well informed. She gave lots information that supported her thesis. At the beginning she spoke about the ARG and she then branched off into a particular episode entitled 'Bree Phone Home' and then she merged them supporting her thesis.
My Critiques.
1)She didn't really elaborate on LonelyGirl 15 the series
2)She should have been clearer who her target audience was, at the time she wrote it.

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